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Showcase 2022 Choreo Advice
Hi everyone!
I’ve choreographed something for my studio’s showcase in May, and I wanted to get some opinions on it. Anything that looks really nice? Any moves that look a little awkward? Something about it gives me beginner vibes and part of that is probably due to the moves I chose, but I still want to have it look more advanced by incorporating more flow/smoother transitions into my movements (and get better at controlling my facial expressions lol).
Video One: https://www.studioveena.com/videos/view/6201a774-6110-4d57-a47a-279fac110005
Video Two: https://www.studioveena.com/videos/view/6201a874-6bd0-4044-b743-2760ac110005
I’ve linked to two videos on my profile. The first one I filmed by myself, so it’s flowier in my opinion but you can’t see everything (all the extended hand gestures and whatnot). The second one I had someone else film, so you can see everything, but I got nervous so the timing wasn’t as good as the first (and more awkward laughter and exclaiming “Sh!t”).
Anyways! Was hoping for any constructive criticism so I can do this song justice. Thanks!
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4 Replies
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Nice! I’ll take a look tonight 🙂
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Lovely work! I really like your musicality and the intro pieces. I think it flows nicely on the whole, just looks like more practice/finessing would polish it off to me. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for taking the time to look it over Veena and Pole Raven!
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I commtented on the first video, I think. They both looked good though â¤
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